Abbie Frye | D4rking93

Character Name
Abbie Frye

I Agree
Yes

Has this character appeared in a previous lore?
No

Age
32

Blood Type
AB+

Personality
She is a calm person. Before joining the army as a voluntary, she thought that the world was a peaceful place because she was actually living in peace. Her dad made the decision for her and she actually learned a couple of things, like how life is. Being in a rich family doesn´t make someone happy, and that was her, so she tried to get out of the city for doing a travel around the country... but the infected got first. She had on her the Glock 17 that the military used, but the zombies were too many, the airport was infested... After that day, she only tried to survive along a group.

Character Motivations
She wants to survive at all costs, no matter what. That doesn´t mean that she wants to do anything wrong, because she will try to not do it.

Physical Appearance
6ft woman with scars on her body, most of them on the back and some in the arms (just 2 bullets and 3 knife scars). She is blonde with a long hair and very good muscles, but she is slower for that actually.

Character Image Link
https://www.google.com/search?q=blo...ECBgQAw&biw=1920&bih=969#imgrc=lm-kHkEsoHrSJM

Mechanical Occupation
Policeman

In-Character Occupation
Military (voluntary battle medic)

Biography
Normal day, just boring work like every single week. The routine is always the same: wake up, go to work as a voluntary, going with your friends for some shitty party, sleep... except for that day. The infected... just showed up on the base doors of Ohio like 10 minutes before we heared sirens and gun shots all over the place. I ran away with my parter, Alyssa, but everyone else died, even her because she was bitten. I dont even know how did i even escaped alive, but i coudn´t even count all the bodies in the floor of the entrace when i first came back a year ago. Since then, my house was the only place that i´ve considered safe...
Through 13 years i´ve been trying to survive, and eventually i lost my home, so i had to travel lots of time before i could even see a city where i could even survive. I lost my parents with only 18 years old, and my sister too in Texas.
All alone and without hope, i wondered if i could even keep gowing, untill i reached N.Y. within my last day of food. Today... i dont een know how i still alive, but i can only know one thing... all i´ve been trough it wasn´t for nothing.
I joined the C.P.F. while i was out looking for food. I said i could help with the medical team to a patrol that was in the gates, and they admited me. Since then i was helping the wounded whenever i could in exchange of food and water... and safety.


Would you like your character to start with any items?
- Glock 17 (9mm reglamentary weapon)
- Alice pack (if cant, then a big hicking bag)

Would you like your character to start with any skills?
In priority (so if any of them can´t go in my character)
- First aid 5
- Shooting 5
- Reloading 3
- Strength 7
- Agility 7

Is your character a member of a group?
Yes

Is your character a member of one of the world factions?
C.P.F. (Ranger)

Please detail your position within the faction, as well as your reason for being in The Barrens.
She is in the medical team, she actually helps when she can with the wounded.

What is your Discord username?
? ? ? ?#5194

Hey D4rking, My name is Envy and I'll be handing your application today.

Requirements:

• Your biography needs to be longer than one sentence, detailing Abbie's life so far. Where was she born? You mention she was at the airport, what airport? How did she end up in Upstate New York after the last 13 years since the apocalypse. How did she end up with the CPF? Is she a CPF Ranger, or is she a member of the medical staff in Pittsford?
• On that point, you might want to consider aging her up a bit, since, it's been 13 years, and I doubt anyone has done a tour of duty in any military at age 17.

Recommendations:

• N/A

Comments:

• You're not on the Discord, I highly recommend you join it here. Once your character is appoved, you'll have access to the CPF Channel in that case.
• The rest of your app is fine, but you should consider moving some of the details in the Personality section down to her biography.
• I should also give a couple of plot points about where the CPF is currently. After the end of last season, a terrorist group bombed Pittsford, the main city and a large amount of rangers are currently resolving events in the city right now, (including 2 of my own personal characters). Once approved I'll have to discuss with you where exactly you want to be IC. We're looking like we're finally going to get the Pittsford plotline resolved, so it might be a possibility that Abbie can accompany us during that event, exact details we can work out later on where to spawn her in.

Alright, that being said, you can edit your application by clicking the "edit" button under your post, replaying once those changes have been made. If you have any more questions, specifically about CPF stuff, do not hesitate to ask.

My bad, disregard the join the discord comment, I did not realize you were on the DIscord already lol

M8 im new here, i dont even know how do you think i can handle a story when in the page the lore is literally 2 sentences short, and worse than that is the fact that the groups dont even have a lore page or something to guide new pepole. Also, when i did my character before i didn´t even needed to specify some things that were not important at all, like what airport we were or some stuff like that.

Hi! I'm Pika, and I'll be reviewing your application for the time being!

The lore page itself is short and open-ended, but it's to leave the 13-year gap between What We Become and What Remains up to the imagination more than anything else. However, we do have more information on the lore and factions. In fact, we have an entire subforum dedicated to it, as well as a wiki for the server.

Here's some information that's relevant to you and your character:

• Faction Overviews
• Season 1 Lore Recap
• What Remains Characters (up-to-date)
• The Coalition of Pittsford and Fairpoint Wiki Page

In terms of your application, as it stands currently, you're still lacking a good amount of important information, namely in your biography. We ask for one solid paragraph to give both you and us a better idea of your character and their background. Your biography was originally two sentences, and you've added one.

After looking over the lore information I've provided, try to elaborate some more, specifically on Abbie's history with the CPF. If you need help with specific aspects of the lore, you can always ask our Lore Master, @MindGate !

Everything else is fine, in my opinion, but I can't accept your application yet with how your biography stands currently.

Done, now please approve it

Man... tell me that its done. Please, i never had such a bad time with this.