Kyle Fitzsimmons | WaldoLSX

Character Name
Kyle Fitzsimmons

I Agree
Yes

Has this character appeared in a previous lore?
No

Age
35

Blood Type
O+

Personality
calm curious

Character Motivations
to survive and help others survive

Physical Appearance
5'7 brown hair blue eyes long hair and full beard and mustache

Character Image Link


Mechanical Occupation
mechanic

In-Character Occupation
mechanic

Biography
i was always into cars and motorcycles i grew up watching and going to the races so it was only natural that my adult life be surrounded by them to i went to school learning how to repair and modify vehicles of all sorts but then the world changed i am happy i have learned much about vehicles and using tools to help me in this new world being able to repair vehicles to help me survive during the pass 12 years i have been surviving by rummaging through houses and the vehicles i have used i am on the road constantly looking for more survivors and supplies as i am trying to help as many people as i can lending them my knowledge so they can survive or find family members and friends or maybe even become part of a group if i find one

Would you like your character to start with any items?
screwdriver pliers

Is your character a member of a group?
No

Would you like to be placed in a random group at the start of the lore?
Yes

What is your Discord username?
waldo1337#5662

Heya, WaldoLSX! My name is Pika, and I'll be reviewing your application today.

Before we can go any further, I need to address the most glaring issue: You haven't read the lore. That's evident by the mention of Kyle having attended college. He's 20 and we're 12 years into the apocalypse, so he would have been 8 when it started. Please give the lore a read-through here, then rewrite your biography to reflect it.

Reply to bump the thread once you've made those changes, and we can continue with the application process. Thanks!

sorry about that i did read the lore but that part must not have sunk in i will change his age to reflect that thanks for the fast reply

That's fine! He'd be 32, then.

With that out of the way, we can move on to the actual review process.

• Everything looks good so far, I just need you to elaborate a little more on everything. It's incredibly brief. We ask for a paragraph minimum for personality and character motivations so that we can have a good idea of who your character is as a person. I'm not really getting that from what's written currently.
• Adding a bit more on to the biography specifically mentioning how Kyle has fared these past 12 years in a post-apocalyptic world would be useful but isn't required since you've already met the one paragraph minimum.

Again, reply to bump the thread once you've made those changes and I'll take another look. Thanks!

is that better? thanks again

Yup, you're good to go! Your application is accepted.

Here's your login info:

Username: Kyle Fitzsimmons
Password: fletchling

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You'll be whitelisted once the server is up and running.

If you have any questions, feel free to respond and ask. Thanks!