Harvi Damini | HarviDamini

Character Name
Harvi Damini

I Agree
Yes

Has this character appeared in a previous lore?
No

Age
26

Blood Type
A Positive
Personality
Gay, atheist, always optimistic, loves to shop, loves books, dislikes crowds.

Character Motivations
Desire to survive

Physical Appearance
Average build, bloody clothes, cap, traces of injuries caused by the apocalypse.
Character Image Link


Mechanical Occupation
A carpenter

In-Character Occupation
Was a carpenter now trying to survive.

Biography
Before the apocalypse, he lived with his parents in a small house in the suburbs. After the apocalypse, he lived in a barricaded gas station. After 2 years of survival, the base was destroyed and he had to flee from there, he no longer saw his parents and people who lived at the gas station. Since then, he has tried to survive in the brutal apocalypse.

Would you like your character to start with any items?
Camping backpack, Bottle of milk

Is your character a member of a group?
No

Hi, HarveyDamini! My name is Pika, and I'll be reviewing your application today.

Before we can go any further, I need to address the most glaring issue: You haven't read the lore. At least, there are no direct references to it in Harvi's biography. The biography overall is far too short. We require at least one paragraph. Please lengthen Harvi's biography and include a brief summary of his life and how he's fared thus far ~14 years into the apocalypse. Note that he would have been 9 when it began since he is 22. You can read the lore here.

Reply to bump the thread once you've made those changes, and we can continue with the application process. Thanks!

I fixed everything, it's just hard for me to read all this, since I am Russian, and I use google translate