Maxwell Madrazo | MarquisAesir

Character Name
Maxwell Madrazo

I Agree
Yes

Has this character appeared in a previous lore?
No

Age
23

Blood Type
B-

Personality
Maxwell is a friendly person and rarely will engage violence unless its absolutely necessary or is commanded by someone higher than him. the idea of hurting another human being by his own will is abhorrent to Maxwell, but will defend himself no matter what. Though not a religious person he does respect other people's belief and other people's opinion and values them.

Character Motivations
Maxwell will strive for peace, If not attainable, he will strive inner peace whatever that makes him comfortable... be it burning a whole building down to attract a horde away from his house..

Physical Appearance
Maxwell is a very muscular person through the years of training himself and him going to the gym at a young age

Character Image Link


Mechanical Occupation
Lumberjack

In-Character Occupation
Soldier

Biography
Maxwell is of an Asian decent his family migrated to west point Kentucky in the midst of the 70s Maxwell grew up in west point. Though he never had a proper education he joined the military and got training there. Maxwell was designated a post in Muldraugh which he disliked the orders of the higher in command to shoot on sight even if they're not infected and later on deserted his post.

Would you like your character to start with any items?
An axe and a large alice pack (framed)

Is your character a member of a group?
No

Would you like to be placed in a random group at the start of the lore?
No

Heya, MarquisAesir! My name is Pika, and I'll be reviewing your application today.

Before we can go any further, I need to address the most glaring issue: You haven't read the lore. That's evident by the mention of Maxwell having attended college. He's 28 and we're 12 years into the apocalypse, so he would have been 16 when it started. Please give the lore a read-through here, then rewrite your biography to reflect it.

Reply to bump the thread once you've made those changes, and we can continue with the application process. Thanks!

Pika said

Heya, MarquisAesir! My name is Pika, and I'll be reviewing your application today.

Before we can go any further, I need to address the most glaring issue: You haven't read the lore. That's evident by the mention of Maxwell having attended college. He's 28 and we're 12 years into the apocalypse, so he would have been 16 when it started. Please give the lore a read-through here, then rewrite your biography to reflect it.

Reply to bump the thread once you've made those changes, and we can continue with the application process. Thanks!

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Hey, yeah I don't quite understand where to read the full lore I need help

I linked it in my message, but it's difficult to differentiate hyperlinks from normal text on the forums. I'll have to take a look at that. Here's the link itself:

Lore

Pika said

I linked it in my message, but it's difficult to differentiate hyperlinks from normal text on the forums. I'll have to take a look at that. Here's the link itself:

Lore

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I hope this is good enough :3

Pika said

You still haven't read the lore. Maxwell's biography conflicts even more than it did before. This lore takes place 12 years after the apocalypse in Monroe County, New York. That's up near Rochester, very far upstate. His age also doesn't reflect his biography if he moved to Kentucky in the 1970s.

Everything you have currently can work. He can be from Kentucky. Just be sure to include how he got to be in New York and a general summary of how he's fared for the past 12 years.

Once you're done with that, reply to bump the thread again and I'll take another look. Thanks!

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Sorry but what year did the apocalypse start and what year is it currently in game that is very unclear to me.

It started in early 2015 and it is currently December 2028!